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“The twinkling of the lights”

Toni had made his best to hide the small present he had in hands from [f/n] all day long. He had spun the girl around the kitchen, so she wouldn’t see hanging on a shelf, stuffed it in his pocket, put it over the refrigerator, and even under a cushion of the sofa the little package had spent some time under. He knew that sooner or later it would reach her hands, but he wanted to make the moment be perfect.

“As Santa carols fill the household”

Not that she seemed to buy his excuses at all. [f/n] was, after all, a very cunning girl, and she was suspicious that the Spaniard was up to something. Damn him for having a soft spot for a sharp tongue and a witty intuition.

“Old Saint Nick has taken flight”

He felt the velvet against his skin once more, his eager digits playing with its soft texture. A smile sneaked its way towards his cheeks as he did.

Yes, Toni loved [f/n].

And now there was only one thing left to be asked.

“With a heart on board so please be careful”
¡Feliz Navidad! - Merry Christmas

Continuation to my Christmas series (but, please notice it is a different reader-chan). This time, with a very sweet Spaniard as the main character. For :iconbobamilkutea:, because I know how much she loves Spain. Here you go, darling, I hope you like it, despite how short it is. :squee:

Comments, anyone?

Hetalia is note mine.

You - :iconsexyspainplz:

Picture found on Google.
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:icondjwolfdragon3:
DJwolfdragon3 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*slightly worried* Toni, you've been acting odd all day, all of these weird excuses. You know you can tell me anything.
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idclolz Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
-turns around before spain gives it to me- YES!!!!!  I WILL MARRY YOU FORSHIZZLES!!!! X3
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspainplz::iconsaysplz: Slow down, chica.
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:iconidclolz:
idclolz Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
XD I'll try but it probably wont work...
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Chibi-Vodka Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
I love this!! Spain is my favorite character!(ignore profile name) thanks so much!
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :squee:
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
I wish there was more...*pout*
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsweatplz: Sorry.
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastico, esto esta genial mi amiga, pero hubieras puesto diálogos
(Amazing, this is awesome my friend, but you could put dialogues)
See you later
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gracias! These were made as drabbles, so it wasn't intended for them to come out long. XD
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okey
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KirstineMelody Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Simple, short and sweet! You really master the art of fluff!Ai Fuyuumi (Happy) [V1]

The way you portray the reader is absolutely amazing. "Cunning, sharp tongue, witty intuition..." Just incredible. And I really love Spain!

You deserve hugs and love and glory and luck and... Come here! Let me hug you! 
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz: Thank you!

:iconmegablushplz: Well, I try my best. XD
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bobamilkutea Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A story dedicated to me, and a SpainXReader too... really, thank you! :iconyuiwahplz:

I... DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'M... I'M SO HAPPY! :iconhappytearsplz:

Honestly, this :squee::squee::squee:is what I literally did the moment I clicked the link to your Christmas present! Thank you!

I love how the story was short and straight to the point. It's so sweet and adorable and fluffy, my feels exploded everywhere... MY CHEEKS STILL FEEL HOT YOU KNOW! <3

Also, I love how, even though it was short, I can still sense the depth of reader-chan and Spain's relationship in the story. Good job! <3

And the description of reader-chan will not be overlooked; cunning, suspicious, and witty... Those characteristics, yes, I love them! You are so awesome, even hundreds of Prussias cannot compare! xD

Fluff is my favorite story genre, and this is perfect! Thank you so much for the present! I LOVE YOU!  :iconhappytearsplz:

And did you know Feliz Navidad is often played here? Now I get to think about Spain and this story whenever I hear the song... which is a lot of times everyday until Christmas! <3

AND SPAIN...

:iconbobamilkutea::iconsaysplz: WHY YES, YES! I WILL! <3:iconsaysendplz:

:iconconfusedspainplz::iconsaysplz: But... I haven't even asked it yet :iconsweatplz: :iconsaysendplz:

LOL. I'm sorry, I can't help it. :iconsweatdropplz:

AGAIN, THANK YOU! <3
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There you go again, making me nearly cry while reading one of your comments. THANK YOU FOR BEING AWESOME!

It was so short, but I couldn't figure out another way to make it longer. And... Gahhh the fluffiness. I will become diabetic (but if I am writing stories for you while doing so, then I will take my insulin gladly. ^^

I do imagine you'd be all of those things, so I put them on my text. I love you too, you wonderful human being! =D

That's good. At least you have a chance to think about this sweet guy until Christmas. XD

...Now I'm jealous. You're metaphorically married to me. :XD:

It was a pleasure, dear. :)
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bobamilkutea Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh please, the story is already well-written and perfect as it is. There's no need to make it longer. <3
And awww, you're too sweet! I'll probably be the one who's gonna become diabetic at this point! xD

And you're also very kind! You think highly of me, I'm a bit embarrassed. haha :iconembarrassingplz:

Yes I do! and it's all thanks to you, THANK YOU! I JUST... LOVE YOU, OKAY?! <3

Wait, wha-? Well, I'll always choose you over Spain. You're just too adorable to pass up! :iconbrohugplz:

:iconspainsulkplz::iconsaysplz: But you just said.. :iconsaysendplz:

Thank you, I am really thankful. I loved the story a lot. <3
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MMMMM2MMMMM Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.... *Squees* So cute~!! I can't.... I can't..... Breathe
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O Breathe, please. I want you to read your present. XD
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MMMMM2MMMMM Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O-okay... *breaths, then excitedly flails arms around before behaving* Sorry... I just HAD to do that...
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
And you said this was a two-shot right*nudge**nudge*
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD: Sorry, one-shot only.
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:iconinugirl115:
Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Well
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:iconvaleryeb:
valeryEB Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh mein gott!
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconblushplz:
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flippin-nuggets-25 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yes..... "(name) will you make cookies with me?"
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspaincryplz::iconsaysplz: Oh, chica.
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flippin-nuggets-25 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
woo i win......
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FukuyaYu Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awnn... O Toni é muito fofo X3
Com histórias de Natal fofas como essas que você está escrevendo eu nem vou precisar comer doces para sobreviver XD 
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eu já desisti da glicose faz tempo. Diabetes diária com esses rapazes na minha cabeça. XD O próximo é o Russia. Ficou tão fofo também. ^^
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FukuyaYu Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Russia é fofura em pessoa XD 
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:iconxtechsilverwolfx:
xTechSilverWolfx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww! Short but so sweet! :squee: I love it!
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
They're all really short. But, yes, all the fluff is going to kill me one of these days. :XD: Thank you! :glomp:
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xTechSilverWolfx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry, when that happens I'll just throw some stuffed pink unicorns at you :XD: You're welcome! :huggle:
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No rainbows? :XD:
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:iconxtechsilverwolfx:
xTechSilverWolfx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah, I'll just barf 'em xD
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfacepalmplz:
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:iconxtechsilverwolfx:
xTechSilverWolfx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icontrolldanceplz:
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:iconetiheline:
EtiHeline Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Wait, is that present what I think it is?!
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, he's going to ask reader-chan to marry him. :iconblushplz:
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EtiHeline Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Eeeeeeeek!
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:iconaranel753:
aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD:
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EtiHeline Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Sorry if I missed you already mentioning this, but who are you going to do next (or are these the only two)?
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Next, we'll have Russia. ^^ And, no, I didn't mention it. XD
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EtiHeline Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thnx
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Heavenxcookie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013   Traditional Artist
This is awesome!
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :squee: I like to make these drabbles. XD
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Heavenxcookie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013   Traditional Artist
No problem :D
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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Heavenxcookie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013   Traditional Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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aranel753 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlovelyhugplz:
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